Broken by D.D. Chant

Broken City (Book #1)


I took a lot of time thinking how to review this book.
while it was descriptive, the overuse of metaphors and detail distracted from the heart of the story. Maybe if that was slimmed down it would have been an enjoyable read.
I found this book hard to hold my interest. when I thought it was picking up it would drop again (due to overuse of detail) it is very hard to get into the story because of the distractions.

I do could be a good book with some  editing and a rewrite.

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